I Will Be Moved

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  1. Peter Both said:

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    My simple way of life
    Might soon be crashing, crashing
    I see a danger sign
    And it keeps flashing, flashing
    I know it's so out of line to even fantasize
    Oh yes, I realize but..
    The moment I see you, I'm all mesmerized
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved
    I want to be near you, I really can't disguise
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved

    You told me several times
    We are like sister and brother
    And you can speak your mind
    While you can't bother your lover
    Can it be an invitation I read in your eyes?
    Oh yes, I realize that..
    The moment I give in, I will pay the price
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved
    Confusion has set in. What do I sacrifice?
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved

    Flaming gusts of wanting you
    Getting stronger and stronger
    Beyond the point of fighting it
    Can't hold it much longer
    My common sense is leaving me
    I feel like letting go..
    My defenses are battered, emotions overflow
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved
    My resistance in tatters, all systems say go
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved
    I will be moved, oh yeah, I will be moved
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Peter,this is interesting,good,and a little confusing!Is this a song or a poem?Is there a chorus?What type of music?
    The first stanza is my favorite,by a long shot!!
     
  3. Peter Both said:

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    Thanks, Doug. It is definitely a song and not a poem, although I may have indulged a bit in poetic language. Maybe I'll change the last stanza. After all I do want my song to be sung. The music is groovy with a rhythm 'n blues/soul feel. Van Morrison, Robert Cray, Ray Charles that's the direction I'm thinking of here. Classic rock and classic soul are my favorite types of music.