Heralds Of The Night

Today's a new scent
For the wolf pack
To ride on
Bringers
Harbingers
Heralds of the night
Their songs upon
The crescent moon
Dripping
In the wake

A fury, comes an
Aftermath in their tongue
News spread fast
On naked ears
Ever so
Blind

As cracks open
A mass swelling
Bearings
Now comes their
True nature
In a form of
Ritualistics & campfires
Dancing mad men
And late nights
Forgotten

By
The caravans haunted
Of baying beasts before
Crossing riverbeds tossing
Plague ridden bodies
Downstreams
And further

"Take the
Remnants on stakes
For the eyes
To witness
A cruelty for justice
Fear, for the people"
Do not believe them

Mark a new scent
For the wolf pack
To ride on
Bringers
Harbingers
Heralds of the night
Their songs upon
The crescent moon
Forever
In the wake
Of the wild

These are good, I really like how they flow throughout, if there was music to this what would it be like because I'm imagining something at a steady pace that's also soft but heavy at the same time?

Thanks! Yes I imagined this in Mikael Åkerfeldt's demonic voice haha, I think it would be heavy. But i'd like to add some clean vocals on some parts as well, maybe repeat a few highlights... we'll see

Yes i think that would sound very good xD when you say highlights, what parts do you mean?

I don't know yet, perhaps the spoken part? I figure it could work both ways, once screamed...and once sung properly. Not sure though.

Or perhaps no repetitions are needed. I'll have to see once we use this song for something

Hi Eccer! Had to read this many times, but I say: yes!

I hear Armin van Buuren's voice here, serenity trance... check it out. Her voice would fit (IMO)....
Thanks for posting!