Walking in Another Man's Shoes

Hey there! I just found this forum and I hope it's a place I can share my lyrics with others and talk about lyric writing. I enjoy lyric writing and I want to improve but to do that I need to talk with other lyric writers. I'll try to be as active as I can, feedback is important and sometimes it's hard to get people's thoughts but i'll do my best. Hopefully this is a rewarding community I can be a part of. Having said that, here's my latest set of lyrics, I hope to here from you.

Verse

I know she sees me like i'm clay
And from her deepest yesterday
She's slowly molding me away
And making me like him

She had me change the way I walk
Chose who I see and how I talk
But never will she make be balk
And answer her with 'No'

Verse

She bought me shoes i've seen him in
Jackets, jeans and cartigans
Clothes I don't like being in
But she won't ever know

And my attire, so long worn in
Are haggard things now stored in bins
My closet space now holds within
The costume of a man


Chorus

Will I ever feel complete
Walking in another man's...
Am I just a fool she keeps
Walking in another man's shoes


Vese

Well if I ever told her no
I'm sure she'd quickly let me go
But I would never want to know
A life not by her side

I know that what she does is wrong
I know it's dumb to play along
And yet I know i'm just not strong
Enough to let her go


Chorus

Will I ever feel complete
Walking in another man's
Am I just a fool she keeps
Walking in another man's shoes

Bridge

The hardest part of all
Is knowing she still wants him
Knowing if he came for her
Nothing I could do
Would make her stay

Chorus

Will I ever feel complete
Walking in another man's...
Am I just a fool she keep
Walking in another man's...

Will I ever feel complete
Walking in another man's...
Am I just a fool she keep
Walking in another man's shoes

Welcome aboard!You have songwriting talent,if this isn't the only song you've written.I hope you stick around,submit song lyrics,give feedback and possibly make a few friends.Great first song!
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