i really love this song i loved writing it, making it better and everything. i hope you guys like it too, feel free to give any comments on it ..... bit of back ground its about how you can go to your own happy place and everything is perfect also how that certain person can find there way in and drag you back to reality, only for you to find that with them reality is far superior to your wonderland.

There is a world I know
A place in which you can’t go
Its mine not to share
A place where I am bare

The people know my face
Smiling with a warm embrace
Happy to see me every day
Listening to every word I say

But then I see your eyes
You managed to find a way inside
Passed through all my defences
See through all my pretences

Everyone is perfect here
Happiness can endear
Beauty surrounds you everywhere
The smell of flowers fills the air

But then I look at you
How did you get through?
You come and took my hand
To lead me out of wonderland

But then I see your eyes
You managed to find a way inside
Passed through all my defenses
See through all my pretenses

With the wind our bodies twirled
You brought me back to my old world
But standing here next to you
This old world seems so new

This is better then my wonderland
Now where here hand in hand
This new world once so cold
But now its perfects because I have you to hold

Wow.......trueprefection!!You've finally written a song that that's equal to your ATL moniker!Congratulations!This is something like I would write,if the circumstance were relevant.Nice going,True.Oh,if this story is true,you're lucky!

hahah thank bud if its up to your standards then im even more impressed with how it has gone i wish it was, im still in my own wonderland just waiting for someone to bring me back to reality

Good write! I would make a slight change in the second line and say, "A place WHERE you can't go.

It's better to live in your Wonderland (I call mine a Dream World) than in a reality that sucks.

at the moment it really is but im sure one day when some one is worth it then you both can create your own "dream land" but till that day then hell yes your own is the best