perfect mum <3

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  1. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

    Red face perfect mum <3

    so i found this from about 3/4 years ago. its about when my mum had cancer and she didn't tell me and my younger brothers, but i found out but couldn't find a way to let her know that i knew and how she doesn't have to do this alone so i wrote this and gave it to her. she got better and is back to normal and yes we fight and argue like every family but she knows il always be there for her like she has been for me.

    Gave all you had to give
    You fought for all you won
    Feel far from perfection
    But you raised the perfect son

    You shed blood sweat and tears
    For there to be a brighter day
    Never stopping to surrender
    Even when your skies where so grey

    Worked to the bone
    For every little crumb
    I may not have told you
    But you’re the perfect mum

    You looked after me
    Helped me when I got sad
    You tried to gave me all
    Of what you never had

    Held me tight when I got scared
    Nothing you couldn’t do
    Picked me up every time
    And whispered “I love you”

    Worked to the bone
    For every little crumb
    I may not have told you
    But you’re the perfect mum

    Now you sit back and rest
    It’s my turn to look after you
    I’ll hug you when you get scared
    And I will help you through

    Im here for you always
    As I know you are for me
    Together we will beat this
    Forever strong is this family

    Worked to the bone
    For every little crumb
    I may not have told you
    But you’re the perfect mum

    Time I worked my hardest
    And do all I can do
    To show you in my own way
    That I love you too
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Beautiful setiment,your mum would be proud of you.My mother died of cancer as well.Too bad I don't have the same feelings you do.
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    I'm glad you have a strong relationship with your mother. Mine passed away 3 years ago.
     
  4. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    sorry to hear about both of your losses guys :/ make me treasure every moment the good and the bad
     
  5. LooknGlass said:

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    Very very good song. I lost my mom last year. Great emotion and heartfelt. Good job!
     
  6. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    again sorry to hear that bud :/ sad when someone you love is lost .....but thanks for the kind words about my lyrics
     
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    amaryn said:

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    On this song/poem I can only comment with humble feelings: you are lucky to have a good relation with your mother, or let me say: a normal one,
    Doug writes he can't say the same, neither can I, unfortunately.
    You wrote these words with sincere feelings, I notice. Both you and your mum are lucky ones.
     
  8. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    i know i am and im thankful of it every day even when she annoys me or we argue, its one of the worst things i could imagine not having a good relationship with a parent specially a mum.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Having a "good"relationship with a mother or "mother figure"(step-mother) is something, I'm sorry to say, I'm unfamiliar with.When I watch a nature show and see a Lion's cub getting licked by it's mother I almost start to cry!It's something that hurts everyday of my life;no motherly love.Don't do it folks,love your kids,they had no choice in the matter!
     
  10. KatChapman1299 said:

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    this song is so beautiful... :,)
     
  11. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    thank you its for a beautiful person i just hope it shows how amazing she is :3