Dreams

VERSE 1
I've been Listening!Listening!
And Dreaming!
Listening!Listening!
And Screaming!!
No one seems to know
And those who do don't seem to care
I've been Falling!Falling!
And crying!
Falling!Falling!
And dying!!

CHORUS
I can see you in my dreams
You fall apart like seems
I can hear you in my dreams
Your voice as clear as sunlight beams

VERSE 2
I've been Waiting!Waiting!
For you!
Waiting!Waiting!
For something new!!
You have filled my life
But you're not really there for me
I've been Bleeding!Bleeding!
Over you!
Bleeding!Bleeding!
On promises overdue!!

REFRAIN

VERSE 3
I walk an empty barren road
Carrying this heavy load
I need some help
I need you here
Cause when you're not.....
That's my greatest fear.....

REFRAIN

Hi! Your songs seem to have lyrics which are easily singable, so let's see what rhythms you have in mind when writing this, for example.
You tell me. I'd like to hear it from you

yeah i am learning guitar to put music with my lyrics so that should b fun u will b the first to hear wen i do!

Electric or acoustic? Btw: how do your fingers react?

accoustic wat?? :\

Acoustic guitars have nylon strings, are softer/easier to play and are always unplugged.

Not all acoustic guitars have nylon strings but the ones that do are easier to play also if the action is lower on the fret board it's easier to press down as well. Also you want to have the lowest thickness you can for acoustic strings. But anyway I like the song "you fall apart like seems" is a little confusing for me but other than that I really like it. Obviously I don't know the flow of the song and the rhythm so I can't say anything else about it but that I like it. And I want to be the 2nd person to hear it :-).

I hear your desperation. There's always a woman at the bottom of it.

please stop being so prejudice i did not specify he or she as im actually gay so..... :\

This took a few readings to "get used to"!But now that I have,I likes it!A lot!Rock on!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

This took a few readings to "get used to"!But now that I have,I likes it!A lot!Rock on!

wat do u mean it took a few readings to "get use to"?? :\ thank u

Originally Posted by Johnb31

Not all acoustic guitars have nylon strings but the ones that do are easier to play also if the action is lower on the fret board it's easier to press down as well. Also you want to have the lowest thickness you can for acoustic strings. But anyway I like the song "you fall apart like seems" is a little confusing for me but other than that I really like it. Obviously I don't know the flow of the song and the rhythm so I can't say anything else about it but that I like it. And I want to be the 2nd person to hear it :-).

Steelstrings for acoustic guitars tend to strain the guitar a lot. It needs to be a special designed guitar to have steelstrings talking about acoustic ones. My friend here, guitarrepair is his professional job, advices strongly against such "adventure".
But you're right, John, that such guitarmodels do exist, though they're not popular.

Originally Posted by Santana Lonergan

wat do u mean it took a few readings to "get use to"?? :\ thank u

Okay......I'm a little slow on certain things,but........I came back for more!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Okay......I'm a little slow on certain things,but........I came back for more!

oh right lol thanks all the same

why is this song gone red???

Originally Posted by Santana Lonergan

why is this song gone red???

Over 300 views!Now you're in the Big Time,like me!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Over 300 views!Now you're in the Big Time,like me!

oh right hahaha lol sweet sounds great who knows i might be famous some day lmfao

Santana!!! Congrats! No more worries nobody reads your poems,lol! I am proud of you. You have guts!

I hope to see more of your creativity in the near future pal!
(to honour you, this message was in red )

Originally Posted by Santana Lonergan

oh right hahaha lol sweet sounds great who knows i might be famous some day lmfao

You ARE FAMOUS!Ask Amaryn he'll tell tell you!