VERSE 1
Although the morning rain
Is pouring down your window pain
I'll make sure to let you know
When I'm ready to go
But I've hoped that you
Would let me stay
But each time I do
You scream at me to go away
But when I turn to go
You come to say goodbye
As I fade
Into the light

CHORUS
I'll walk away
I'll say goodbye
Never to return again
Somewhere,Somehow,Some Pain

VERSE 2
The snow is starting to gather
Winter is starting to set
You're starting to feel like you don't matter
But know that where I've made my bed
You're the first thought in my head
You're alone and cold
You're growing old
Regretting the day you kicked me out
Now you're going without
The love in your bed
And my face in your head

REFRAINx2

VERSE 3
Don't be afraid anymore
I'm right outside your front door
Let me in,Take me back
Please let me unpack
I'm here to save you
From all the pain
And clear the deep,dark skies
Of all the rain

REFRAIN

CHORUS 2
I'm not going anywhere
Anywhere but here
A house that's now a home
You can take the throne
And we can live together
And die together
Somewhere,Somehow
Without the Same Pain

It makes smooth reading, and I think it would be easy to put to music.

Hi Santana! Great you found your own style and your own words for a theme which has been handled so often in music.
Think of "Just walk away René", "If You Go Away" , "Fields of Gold",etc.
I really appreciate your writings. Thanks a lot!

Originally Posted by amaryn

Hi Santana! Great you found your own style and your own words for a theme which has been handled so often in music.
Think of "Just walk away René", "If You Go Away" , "Fields of Gold",etc.
I really appreciate your writings. Thanks a lot!

thanks Amaryn Yeah i was hoping it would be slightly different,but still understandable :\ Glad you liked it

Question:how the "heck" did I overlook this gem?Sorry,I was asleep on the job!I usually like to say something positive to the Lyrics I like,and this fits the bill!I apologize for overlooking this!Great rhymes,great rhythm,great tune!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Question:how the "heck" did I overlook this gem?Sorry,I was asleep on the job!I usually like to say something positive to the Lyrics I like,and this fits the bill!I apologize for overlooking this!Great rhymes,great rhythm,great tune!

its ok i forgive u lol thanks its one of my favourite pieces XD i have 71 songs atm so quite a bit more posting to b done im writing anywhere from 2-3 songs a week but posting 1 so ill b on this site forever lol

Originally Posted by Santana Lonergan

its ok i forgive u lol thanks its one of my favourite pieces XD i have 71 songs atm so quite a bit more posting to b done im writing anywhere from 2-3 songs a week but posting 1 so ill b on this site forever lol

The reason I may have overlooked this wonderful piece when you first posted it is sometimes there are tons of songs submitted and it gets easy to overlook the "good ones"!Posting at a slow pace,in my opinion,the best way to go.When you overwhelm us with many submissions,they sometimes don't get the attention they deserve.

Good stuff, it flows rather nicely. I'd love to check out a youtube channel or something if you have one with music and what not. This is the first one of your songs I've checked out...good first impression!

Originally Posted by The Obscured

Good stuff, it flows rather nicely. I'd love to check out a youtube channel or something if you have one with music and what not. This is the first one of your songs I've checked out...good first impression!

thanks again i hv 8 other songs on the site and another 70ish written so ill hv loads on this site in no time lol