no tomorrow

I have been working on this for some time and am at a stand still. Let me know what you all think. Thank

You should know
There is no tomorrow
Everyday
Will only end in sorrow

You can forget
The bitterness
and pain
That comes to you
In a life with no tomorrow

I would write about how the sun will become a red giant and engulf the planets, making life on earth impossible.

yea i was in the making of this and sounded great to me, and then a blank wall hit me. now i am stuck with unfinished work. I post them to see the reviews and they help me finish them. thanks for the response.