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  1. Matt6660 said:

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    Close your eyes, it will be alright


    I never had a chance to tell you
    how much you meant to me
    I never had the time to show you
    How much i cared
    I wanted the chance to make it
    But it looks like I'll break it

    Just close your eyes, it will be alright
    You keep falling, further and further away
    But i won't let you slip away


    I tried forgetting,forgiving
    But nothing i can do to bring you back
    To me
    All the memories sit in my head
    Haunting Me till i give in

    Just close your eyes, it will be alright
    You keep falling, further and further away
    But i won't let you slip away

    Slipping away
    Slipping away


    Just close your eyes, it will be alright
    You keep falling, further and further away
    But i won't let you slip away
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Matt,I'm glad you put a complete song on.I can hear this sung as a slow,blues or pop song.The title should be "Slipping Away".Memories doesn't do this justice.Good job.
     
  3. Peter Both said:

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    Very touching song. I think anyone one has lost a loved one can relate to it. I agree with Doug that "Slipping Away" would make a better title. (Or maybe "Just Close Your Eyes (It Will Be Alright)")
     
  4. Matt6660 said:

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    Thanks guys i will change the title. I had a title in the works and just thought of that. Slipping away is great. Thanks!!!