Cause and effect (incomplete but getting there)

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  1. Storm00 said:

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    I refrain from uploading the last 2 verses for I believe them to be incomplete but am eager to listen to your thoughts so far


    Verse 1:
    Our lives are filled with regrets,
    Humans hide behind a guise,
    So let's stare into the eyes,
    That stare back filled with lies

    Verse 2:
    We should not be blamed for choices,
    That we made hearing others' voices,
    Not by choice we've been deceived,
    By the ones our trust received.

    Chorus:
    To each effect there is a cause,
    Should we not see it we must pause,
    Refrain from judging and reflect,
    On the reasons that spawned effect.
     
  2. Peter Both said:

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    The chorus is fine. it is a general comment on how we should behave as human beings. (I agree with it) What I would like to see in the verses are real-life examples that can reinforce the message in the chorus. Now the verses do the same thing as the chorus: more general statements about human behavior. Specify!