Please, Help me improve this one. Tnx in adv.
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This is one short
story that's left untold
with so many pages to fold
they're all written in bold

It's about a Island boy
who said he'd make his own boat
and sail on seas no matter how cold
the nights might get he'd go on and go on

It's about a strange call
that came right after he almost sold
his only soul to despair and bought
a lie and a life and lived alone

This is one short
story that's being told
with not much pages left to fold
they're all written in silver and gold


But He said Oh Lord
Please Give me a stronghold
Where I can make my storyboard
Where I can live and die and glow

He said Oh God
I'm working hard and yet i'm told
It's just a life where I'll get old
It's just a fight I'm on alone