(So what?) I am Free

Re-posting because I polished the lyrics, finished the audio and uploaded it to soundcloud. Will have the full song with music finished sometime next month.
Link below is the audio, no music yet. {[Caution, turn down volume]}
https://soundcloud.com/ryver-i/so-what-i-am-free
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Guided
by the hand so forceful
Misguided
by the elements supposed fair her well
Lavish
on this young bird the hopeful
Deprived of
the elevated height to see her fly

So What?
Ill be the vision of myself I choose to see
So What?
I don't walk the path for you, I do it just for me
So What?
I don't fit in your perfect version of reality
Guess What?
There is no control that can break me.
I am free

Put along a path of girders
Funnelled through an area of dark embrace
Cramped into a box unheard of
Expect conformity with grace

Attention calls for misbehaviour
Fingers wag as fast as tails between their legs
Disappointment then surrounds her
For thinking different from the same.

So What?
Ill be the vision of myself I choose to see
So What?
I don't walk the path for you, I do it just for me
So What?
I don't fit in your perfect version of reality
Guess What?
There is no control that can break me.
I am free

Oh.

(Oh my)
What to do?
To spend her life in service...
(Oh my)
What to do?
Or service only one?

Is this all life has to offer
one or the other
one or the other
Divides me
Derides me

Life is what you make it.
Your past does not determine where you go.
Believe in all and follow
The path you'll dream you'll go

I really like this. Not sure if I'd consider it a song, but rather a poem. Either way I love the off the wall wording and the overall theme which was carried out in an unusual way. It's strange. But strange is awesome.

My writing style is unusual i know, which is why I like recording myself singing it so people can understand what kind of melody could possibly go with what seems more poem then lyric. Its just a shame I don't get much alone time to do it. But thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you like it