These lyrics, especially the bridge, remind me of Dave Matthews Band's "Crush" (written by Dave Matthews) in which he sings "Lovely lady, I will treat you sweetly/Adore you, I mean you crush me". It is possible to use so-called cheesy lines which are then combined with other things to make it pleasant enough to read. This does not tread new territory. Grade: Verse (B-); Bridge (C+); Chorus (C+)