Still in progress song...

Thread: Still in progress song...

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  1. muse_8 said:

    Post Still in progress song...

    It was easy to wish to belong in this house. Gm Bb Cm Eb
    Wanted the love that I never felt back
    Tried to play pretend, act that it was ok
    But in the end i pushed you away. Away. A waaay.....
    Away

    Do da do da do do da do do do do, do da do da do do do do

    See I tried to forget, and I tried to move on
    Tried to sleep it away, tomorrow's just another day
    Thought we needed space, thought we needed some time
    Thought you'd come running saying you'd changed your mind
    When that didn't happen I wondered why ?

    Then I realized... I pushed you away, away away away

    It hurt when we met, and hurt when we didn't
    struggled to forgive and struggled to forget
    As we parted ways I only felt regret
    When I realized I'd pushed you away away away away away

    See, Sometimes in life, you gotta take it with a pinch of salt,
    Take the good with bad,
    See space won't do nothing, time will just waste away
    So I guess you won't be changing, and neither will I
    I'm sorry I pushed you ...
    I put my walls up, Im done hiding


    See my problem is I'm having trouble resolving the song and therefore I'm torn about whether to make the last verse a bridge instead and then lead. Into a conclusion or if I should change the ending completely.
    Would really appreciate some feedback on this
    Last edited by muse_8; 11-15-2014 at 01:24 AM.