Dwayne D Galbiati - i am DECIDING TO BE feed back appreciated

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    Dwayne D Galbiati said:

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    THIS IS THE UNEDITED 1 MAIN RHYME I USED
    CHECK IT OUT ON AUDIO

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    Decide to be

    THANKS

    (Hook)

    I am deciding to be the lion of society

    Enemy's riding will be fighting violently

    Friendly smiling still when writing silently

    Envy my style I'm ill enlightened wisely

    I decide to be who I am inside of me

    I decide to be tru in my pen writin free

    I decided to be me again Christ will lead

    V1

    In this hexed life I lead this quest's like my seed

    Kin livin less like me missin deaths advice 2 leave

    Sin isn't just vice to be Ur infected mice with fleas

    Spin kickin head height reach to wreck ur nice teeth

    Win compititions no guess or might be blessed like me

    In my visions I express light beams as injested visene

    Wings clipped feathers sliced clean steppin 2 my team

    King that spits better hype extreme messages I scream

    NeedA pleasured delight sweet essence of night dreams

    Seeds measured height steep stretchin up a high peek

    Beaches pebbles Isa nice sceneIna reflection of society

    Seems 2 never be right 2 me in my expression diary

    Teaching rebels to fight seen as Tekken but violently

    Leadin best bros at light speed wita direction ridin streets

    Kneel Cuz the devel might bea living infection inside me

    Shields a metal typea steel in the resurrection christs leads

    (Hook)

    I am deciding to be the lion of society

    Enemy's riding will be fighting violently

    Friendly smiling still when writing silently

    Envy my style I'm ill enlightened wisely

    I decide to be who I am inside of me

    I decide to be tru in my pen writin free

    I decided to be me again Christ will lead

    V2

    My Vital need to Write and read with Sights2 see in this Life I lead

    I Silently speak like Mice 2 cheese,Tryin to keep out Denyin deceit

    Rice seeds to Pricey 2 eat,any Polite please will get Sliced knees

    Ima Violent machine Ridin streets at Nitro speed my Titles supreme

    No Rival seen ina Recital scene my Revival routine is exciting 2 me

    My Cyco dreams have Silent screams,I'm Tryin to be the Lion seen

    A wild beast Flyin in leaps,wit Giant teeth trying to feast bitin ur spleen

    I Riot extreme riding the streets, right beside these Reliant teams

    I Politely preach, Ignightin my heat like ima Knife in meat Slicin deep

    Enlightened beliefs are Heights that freeze but Christ heats Icey feet

    Defiant fiends,

    Smile and gleam Lieing schemes Area Childs dream

    I'm Wild extreme,

    Vile and mean no Denyal belief just Try to retreat

    Enticed sweet,Blaze likes to compete,

    u might be in defeat,take advice and believe

    U Cry asu bleed Fighting to leave,

    I'm lightning in a breeze to bright to see

    The Light u seek is upa Height thats steep,

    Any Viced disease can't rise to reach

    Mice or sheep,Pike or geese,flies or fleas

    No Life's breeds geta Delightfull please ina life that's leased

    (Hook)

    I am deciding to be the lion of society

    Enemy's riding will be fighting violently

    Friendly smiling still when writing silently

    Envy my style I'm ill enlightened wisely

    I decide to be who I am inside of me

    I decide to be tru in my pen writin free

    I decided to be me again Christ will lead
     

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