hey there teacher lyrics

Here is what I have been working on recently...any help is appreciated..

(chorus)
-Hey there teacher why you pickin on me
I gotta short fuse today so you best let me be
-And if you keep on jeering at me for long
I just might let my voice sing this song

(verse one)
Cause when you start with your rules I feel my focus drift
And when you see me I know your anger shifts

It aint my fault you think I dont belong in a classroom
But you just can't take one look at me and then just assume

(chorus)
-Hey there teacher why you pickin on me
I gotta short fuse today so you best let me be
-And if you keep on jeering at me for long
I just might let my voice sing this song

thanks

Hey there! That's an interesting theme! And it is taken on so well! What you've gotten so far is ver good and well written, the only thing really that can be said about them is just to carry on the way you are with them, because they're great so far, and will become a brilliant song if you ask me! I think alot of people will identify with those lyrics which is what makes them so good! Very nice

thanks! I'm still in the creative process at this point but I appreciate the reponse...