What I've been told

Here goes!

When I was young I was tolt that I could be what I wanna be
But now that I'm older I see how narrow possibility
is and that life is what you make it
so if you wanna go far you'll just have to take it

And avoid all the door that been closing in
on the life that you've never really been livin
Don't stand still and be chill
and let your life fly by and then be asking why


When I was young I was tolt that I could be what I wanna be
But now that I'm older I see how narrow possibility
is and that life is what you make it
so if you wanna go far you'll just have to take it

Life's a game of dice
loaded with a horrible price
but if you stop and look now you won't be asking how

When I was young I was tolt that I could be what I wanna be
But now that I'm older I see how narrow possibility
is and that life is what you make it
so if you wanna go far you'll just have to take it

Hi, I really like those lyrics, however there is one line that I would change, that is the line that goes 'And avoid all the door that been closing in' I don't feel that that line makes sense? I would change it to something like And avoid all the doors that have been closing in. I know that this isn't huge change but i feel that then it would make more sense, but of course that is just my opinion. Otherwise I think your lyrics are really good, I like the message being put across, it has a very clear statement within it and is powerful with the repeated chorus/ verse! Very well done!