Dont Let Me Go

a broken heart just hurts
never thought that itd be mended
that day you came into my life
i knew it felt so right
cause you showed me the meaning of..
moving on..and it feels so good..

<chorus>
you turn my head around
picked my feet off the ground
never thought that youd be the one
to come and save me from this mess
another chance to love
nothing better to think of
i found something good inside of you
just dont let me goo..


the first time i kissed your lips
the feeling was amazing and i..
cant forget your words
you spoke them oh so softly
youre more than i deserve..
the fact is youre more than perfect..

<chorus>
you turn my head around
picked my feet off the ground
never thought that yuod be the one
to come and save me from this mess
another chance to love
nothing better to think of
i found something good inside of you
just dont let me goo..

<bridge>
just stay right here
right here in my arms
holdin me sooo tight..
never let me go
never let me gooo
never let me...
GOOOOO

<chorus 2x>
you turn my head around
picked my feet off the ground
never thought that youd be the one
to come and save me from this mess
another chance to love
nothing better to think of
i found something good inside of you
just dont let me gooo..

sounds like somebody found LOVE

Nah, on the real....that's nice. It sounds authentic, like you are experiencing this feeling right now...hence the "sounds like somebody found LOVE". I like it, you even included a bridge, a basic unit to a song that today's bump and grind genre forgets to incorporate!

i like it and keep working. keep posting....

-in Christ
-Restoration