Argentum Astrum

Here is another song from my band NephilimTorture, and again, i provide fair warning, that the following lyrics may contain content that you find offensive in some way, do not complain about it because you have been warned... If you think you will be offended do not read them... Thanks

Day by day we lighten sky
By will of man not strength of god
Day by day your living a lie
And i stand by knowing how you rot
Conscience clean
Fundamental Differing
We fight so that our words will be
Accepted by those as truth


[Guitar Solo]

We fight strong
the everlast of victory
Never lasts so long
The battle of ends has begun
Tearing down those whove rose
Fear of death is never long
As you stand before Thanatos
You hear the uttering of Kali
In the back of your mind
Creeping oh so slowly
Caught by those who bind
Our last are of pain
As we leave the world of today
Remembering those whove been slain
In the fight that never pays

[Guitar Riff]

[Bass Solo]

Hail thy Hekate
Hail thy Cratos
Hail thy Chaos

I read your lyrics.
Nice topic, not ordinary.
Ideas are a little bit / or more controversary, based on the same point, but maybe it's the decision to aply in only one point.
I see here, and it's no hard to observe it, a lot of pain and anger. This might cause tiredness and the listener would renounce. But it depends on the rhytm you adopt.

I hope I didn't show a negative atitude. I was just giving an opinion.
You know that saying, try o perfet yourself, although you'll never be one of this, but your work might be.

Have a nice evening .

thank you for your feedback... im glad that you could appreciate my lyrics simply for what they were and let none of your own feelings interfere with your simple opinion of them... if you liked these lyrics i urge you to look at the other set of lyrics i have posted, the thread is titled Apokalyptik... thank you

The thing is, a lot of people see metal and assume we're all pi**ed off kids

a lot of us use metal to vent frustrations just as James Blunt uses "you're beautiful" to voice to his ex that he still likes her and he's pi**ed off she's with another guy... Same principle, just one's loud and the other is annoying.

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I like the lyrics. I really do.
I think if you had an up-tempo beat to the lyrics it would sound pretty good.
Even a slower tempo would sound good.

Well seeing as how its metal, it pretty much all has an upbeat tempo...

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i like this part

Day by day we lighten sky
By will of man not strength of god
Day by day your living a lie
And i stand by knowing how you rot
Conscience clean
Fundamental Differing
We fight so that our words will be
Accepted by those as truth