The fight we made

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  1. xoxo-sing said:

    Default The fight we made

    You called me earlier this morning
    just to say you remembered me
    It all just happend without warning
    after all the years I lied awake

    You know just what to say
    when I'm to mad to speak
    you know just where to find me
    When I had walked away

    ♥And I feel like I can't move
    And I feel like I can't speak
    And I don't know what to say
    since it's been three years since the fight we made♥

    I hang up the phone
    and sit on the bed all alone
    I don't need you here with me
    But I know that you still love me

    I didn't go out
    I stayed in the house
    it's funny how one phone call could ruin my day

    Now I just can't breath
    I want you with me

    ♥And I feel like I can't move
    And I feel like I can't speak
    And I don't know what to say
    since it's been three years since the fight we made♥

    ♥And I feel like I can't move
    And I feel like I can't speak
    And I don't know what to say
    since it's been three years since the fight we made♥
     
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    Gleabs said:

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    Your song is pretty good except that it's really hard to understand what you're trying to say. First it sounds like you don't want to talk to him, then it sounds like you want him...It's kind of confusing so I changed a few things for you...I hope you don't mind though:

    You called me early in the morning
    just to say you missed me
    and it really surprised me
    that you actually remembered me

    You know just what to say
    when I'm too mad to speak
    you know just where to find me
    When I'm hiding away
    but guess what
    your call ruined my day

    ♥And I feel like I can't move
    And I feel like I can't speak
    And I don't know what to say
    because it's been three years since the day we fought♥

    I hung up the phone
    and sat on the bed all alone
    like a little queen on her throne
    Smiling to my self just because
    you showed your love to me today

    ♥And I feel like I can't move
    And I feel like I can't speak
    And I don't know what to say
    since it's been three years since the day we fought♥

    ♥And I feel like I can't move
    And I feel like I can't speak
    And I don't know what to say
    since it's been three years since the day we fought♥
    The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on. - Robert Bloch
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