wont you stay 2

wont you stay, wont you stay,
if i cahnge these words to 'mistakes' and 'forgive me girl',
would they dry your eyes and kee you safe,
wont you stay.

Fadind stary nite skies,
and only distant memories of just holding hands,
i'd hold you tight but just for one more night,
between your smiles and regrets.

I'll keep you safe if you promise to leave before i wake.
This is all i can take.

It's good! LOVE IT!