I know why (plz review)

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  1. xoxo-sing said:

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    You can't undo
    the worst parts of you
    forgive and forget

    You can not see
    the worst parts of me
    I haven't asked for your forgiveness yet

    ♥and I know why---
    You always seem to have the right words
    You brought the sky---
    to me, to show me, what you can really be♥

    You saw my fate
    you saw in my eyes
    that I was going to waste
    and you realized

    ♥and I know why---
    You always seem to have the right words
    You brought the sky---
    to me, to show me, what you can really be♥

    Before you
    I was less than worthless
    before you
    I wouldn't know how to say this


    ♥and I know why---
    You always seem to have the right words
    You brought the sky---
    to me, to show me, what you can really be♥


    ♥and I know why---
    You always seem to have the right words
    You brought the sky---
    to me, to show me, what you can really be♥
     
  2. xoxo-sing said:

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    Plz Review
     
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    it seem pretty good, When i read it, i've sing in my head with a melody that's match this song. However the understanding of the song seem a ilttle disconnected.
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.