Kindly Help Me Translate My Poem "Nobody Noticed"

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  1. threejays31 said:

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    Kindly help me translate my poem "Nobody Noticed" into Spanish, Tnx!

    - NOBODY NOTICED -

    There he was,
    standing so manly,
    waiting for somebody to pass by.

    There he was,
    running his hand through his unruly hair
    with smoothness that killed me.

    And there he was,
    looking absently at people walking by,
    looking absolutely bored
    and his eyes caught mine.

    His deep-set eyes
    that sparkled like ocean
    under bright stars on a moonlight night
    and nobody noticed.

    Nobody noticed
    that he smiled at me
    and slowly walked towards the door where i stood.

    Nobody noticed
    that he looked straight into my hesitant eyes,
    straight into my beating soul.

    He took my quivering hand
    and laced it in his.

    Nobody noticed
    because everybody was dancing
    and drinking and kissing.

    Nobody noticed
    that he touched my face
    and he held me close,
    that he tilted my head back,
    and he whispered sweetly to me,
    shared with me sweet undying words
    that i long to hear.

    For no reason, my heart began to rattle,
    my breathing hasten,
    and my thoughts wouldn't settle,
    I've tried to ignore it,
    but it just grows stronger,
    reaching the limit where I could hold it no longer.

    He, the infamous provoker.
    He peppered my world with his poisoned tongue.

    For one brief moment
    I wish time would stop
    and forever feel this way,
    asking God, "Is he the one?"
    He makes me feel like I'm in heaven.
    He turns me on with just his voice.

    For that short time, I feel so special.
    Giving me this necklace,
    as an understanding of two hearts.
    I could never forget that moment.
    We laughed for no other reason,
    but we were together.

    In that one moment that seemed to last forever.
    One moment that ended just as it began.
    I don't know how he walked away that sudden
    I could have run after him,
    and say how much i love him.
    Bu i stood glued to that sacred ground,
    and watched him hold another girl's hand.

    For one moment, i felt bliss and be frustrated,
    that i've learned to love him in just a sec.
    How could i miss him
    and hate him at the same time?

    The pain he caused me is still tearing me apart,
    asking God once more, "Is he my first heartache?"

    Here goes the feelings that I hide,
    out bursting with love as ample as the tide,
    thrusting my mind to believe that it's true,

    Oh, that jerk, if he only knew...
    That I would still remember the time we last met,
    and relive the memories of that special moment,
    pausing on the scenery where I see him smile,
    and strive to prolong it even just for a while.

    But no, that time has passed,
    that beautiful one moment made me realized,
    there wasn't going to be more.
    There wasn't going to be more with him.
    I must admit this tale with him must end.
    This beautiful tale that ripped me apart,
    and gnawed at my soul.

    Nobody can blame me for feeling this way,
    because nobody noticed,
    that once, he captured my lonely aching heart.
     
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    istanbulgal said:

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    Oh boy, this was very long and difficult, but hope you will understand it (accents not 100% perfect...too many of them!).


    NOBODY NOTICED - nadie se dió cuenta

    There he was - ahi estuvo el
    standing so manly - parado, tan varonil
    waiting for somebody to pass by - esperando a que alguien le pase

    There he was - ahi estuvo el
    running his hand through his unruly hair - corriendo la mano a través de su rebelde cabello
    with smoothness that killed me - con tal suavidad que me mato

    And there he was - y ahi estuvo el
    looking absently at people walking by - ausentemente buscando a la gente que pasaba a pie
    looking absolutely bored - viendose totalmente aburrido
    and his eyes caught mine - y sus ojos atraparon los mios

    His deep-set eyes - sus ojos hundidos
    that sparkled like ocean - que brillo como el mar (océano)
    under bright stars on a moonlight night - bajo las estrellas brillantes en una noche de luna
    and nobody noticed - y nadie se dió cuenta

    Nobody noticed - nadie se dió cuenta
    that he smiled at me - que me sonrió
    and slowly walked towards the door where i stood - y que lentamente caminó hacia la puerta donde yo estaba

    Nobody noticed - nadie se dió cuenta
    that he looked straight into my hesitant eyes - que miró directamente hacia mis ojos vacilantes
    straight into my beating soul - directamente dentro de mi alma que golpeaba
    He took my quivering hand - tomó mi mano tirirante

    Nobody noticed - nadie se dió cuenta
    because everybody was dancing - porque todos estaban bailando
    and drinking and kissing - y bebiendo y besando

    Nobody noticed - nadio se dió cuenta
    that he touched my face - que me tocó mi cara
    and he held me close - y me acercó hacia el
    that he tilted my head back - que inclinó mi cabeza hacia atrás
    and he whispered sweetly to me - y me susurró dulcemente
    shared with me sweet undying words - compartió conmigo dulces palabras eternas
    that i long to hear - que anhelo escuchar

    For no reason, my heart began to rattle - sin razon, mi corazón empezó a sonar
    my breathing hasten - mi respiración acelerando
    and my thoughts wouldn't settle - y mis pensamientos no pudierón descansar
    I've tried to ignore it - he tratado de ignorarlo (the feelings, not the person)
    but it just grows stronger - pero solamente crece mas fuerte
    reaching the limit where I could hold it no longer - llegando a un límite que ya no puedo soportar

    He, the infamous provoker - él, él infame provocador
    He peppered my world with his poisoned tongue - el salpicó mi mundo con su lengua envenenada

    For one brief moment - por un momento corto
    I wish time would stop - me gustaria parara el tiempo
    and forever feel this way - y sentirme asi por siempre
    asking God, "Is he the one?" preguntando a Dios, "es él el correcto?"
    He makes me feel like I'm in heaven - me hace sentir como si estara en el cielo
    He turns me on with just his voice - me excita con solamente su voz

    For that short time, I feel so special - por ese tiempo corto me siento tan especial
    Giving me this necklace - dandome esta cadena
    as an understanding of two hearts - como entendimiento de 2 corazones
    I could never forget that moment - nunca podria olvidar ese momento
    We laughed for no other reason - reimos por ninguna otra razón
    but we were together - que por estar juntos

    In that one moment that seemed to last forever - en ese corto momento que pareció durar por siempre
    One moment that ended just as it began - un momento que terminó de igual manera como comenzó
    I don't know how he walked away that sudden - no entiendo como pudo irse tan de súbito
    I could have run after him - pude haberle seguido
    and say how much i love him - y decir cuanto lo amaba
    Bu i stood glued to that sacred ground - pero quede parada, pegada a la tierra sagrada
    and watched him hold another girl's hand - y lo mire tocando la mano de otra chica

    For one moment, i felt bliss and be frustrated - por un momento senti felicidad y frustracion
    that i've learned to love him in just a sec. - que aprendi a amarlo en solo un segundo
    How could i miss him - como pude extranarlo?
    and hate him at the same time? y odiarlo al mismo tiempo?

    The pain he caused me is still tearing me apart - el dolor que me causó me sigue destrozando
    asking God once more, "Is he my first heartache?" preguntando a Dios una vez mas, "es el mi primera angustia (dolor de corazón)"?

    Here goes the feelings that I hide - aqui van los sentimientos que escondo
    out bursting with love as ample as the tide - explotando con amor lleno como la marea
    thrusting my mind to believe that it's true - empujando mi mente para creer que es verdad

    Oh, that jerk, if he only knew...oh, ese idiota, si solo supiera
    That I would still remember the time we last met - que aun recordaria el ultimo dia que nos vimos
    and relive the memories of that special moment - y revivir los recuerdos de ese momento especial
    pausing on the scenery where I see him smile - pausando en el paisaje donde lo veo sonreír
    and strive to prolong it even just for a while - y tratar de prolongar aún sólo por un tiempo

    But no, that time has passed - pero no, ese tiempo ya se fue
    that beautiful one moment made me realized - ese momento bonito que hizo dar cuenta
    there wasn't going to be more - que no hiba haber mas (time)
    There wasn't going to be more with him - no hiba haber mas con el
    I must admit this tale with him must end - debo admitir que este cuento con el debe terminar
    This beautiful tale that ripped me apart - este cuento bonito que me destrozo
    and gnawed at my soul - a mi alma

    Nobody can blame me for feeling this way - nadie me puede culpar por sentirme asi
    because nobody noticed - poque nadie se dió cuenta
    that once, he captured my lonely aching heart - que una vez, capturó mi corazón solitario
     
  3. threejays31 said:

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    oh my god, im so grateful, muwaaaahhhhhh, a lot of thanks, my dear :')
     
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    istanbulgal said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by threejays31 View Post
    oh my god, im so grateful, muwaaaahhhhhh, a lot of thanks, my dear :')
    You are very welcome, anytime!.