please review

lyrics to an as-of-yet-untitled song.

with your tongue free of teeth you'll scream satellites
and swallow a sun that never shines
your eyes swelled to immeasurable size
raining on us it feels
like love
like love
like love

any feedback is appreciated.

Sounds like an amphigory to me. Im sorry if that's unkind, I just have no idea what the meaning of these lyrics are.

with your tongue free of teeth you'll scream satellites

Great line pal, great line. It's an epic image that reminds me of Mars Volta.