i need you opinion

well i've just wrote this song n i need to see wat ppl think of it its still in its first draft.
also am thinking of changing the bit wher it say "we need eack other like a flower needs the sun,like a flower needs the sun,light" any ideas?

i want it to be in the same manner as a goo goo dolls song if that helps thanks



there's nothing you can tell me that i won't already know
you tryed to be
the one for me
we wanted the same thing but i wanted more
like the thing we had before
just let it be


for so long we tryed to stay together
but you thought you found someone better
but you couldnt stay in that mess


we've been heer before
but dont forget that i'll be heer
when things start to fall
we'll stay together and stand
just stand tall


we need each other like a flower needs the sun
like a flower need the sun
light


i lie with you cant sleep at night
look at your face and get a fright
i feel all the things inside
can't stop thinking,can't decide
to me

we've been heer before
but don't forget that i'll be heer
when things start to fall
we'll stay together and stand
just stand tall


we need each other like a flower needs the sun
like a flower needs the sun
light


zip up your jacket turn to me
i put my arms around you
stay with me
i've let love in again
so dont turn and run out the door


we need each other like a flower needs the sun
like a flower need the sun
light

Spelling's way off but the words are good.

If someone doesn't like my opinion, I can't help that