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Black bird you know these are not natural feelings
They’re staining your face like blood on carpeting
Fingers I own running out your mouth
my insides are outside running inside out
Send a postcard from the gallows
When you get there
they’ll paint that smile black
When you get there

Oh they take one (x4)
When they know one (x4)

Are all them bones eating all your insides still?
Bruising your stomach I know where they came from
I ate the words running off your rotten tongue
And my skin’s upside down in there inside out
Send a postcard from the gallows
When you get there
they’ll paint that smile back
When you get there

Oh they take one (x4)
When they know one (x4)

Dark with interesting metaphors and a little too deep for me...
I tried reading the poem out aloud a few different ways but couldn't find a "comfortable" pace.
Is the rough and broken pace of the poem intentional?