Bleeding Through [Comments Appreciated!]

I just wrote this song, and was wanting some feedback on how to improve it. It isn't completely finished yet. I might edit it. But please leave some comments on what you think and how to improve the song. Thanks.

Bleeding Through

“I can’t continue this anymore.”
The words burn through my soul,
Leaving my heart broken, ripped apart, burning sore.
The same heart that you once stole,
What else can I do?
You left my heart bleeding through.

Shut me out,
Push me away,
There’s nothing you need to say.
Tear it out,
Throw it away,
I was nothing more than prey.

You say I wasn’t there for you,
My eyes filled with a shade dark like the night skies
As I look into your eyes,
It tears me apart but it’s true.
What else can I do?
You left my heart bleeding through.

Shut me out,
Push me away,
There’s nothing you need to say.
Tear it out,
Throw it away,
I was nothing more than prey.

Shut me out,
Push me away,
There’s nothing you need to say.
Tear it out,
Throw it away,
I was nothing more than prey.

I can’t hide all the pain,
Or the cries left in vain,
All I can do is let it go,
Then maybe pray,
And hope it will turn out okay.

Shut me out,
Push me away,
There’s nothing you need to say.
Tear it out,
Throw it away,
I was nothing more than prey.

Shut me out,
Push me away,
There’s nothing you need to say.
Tear it out,
Throw it away,
I was nothing more than prey.

[I can’t hide all the pain,
Or the cries left in vain,
All I can do is let it go,
Then maybe pray,
And hope it will turn out okay.] During the last repetition of the chorus

After all we've been through,
You left my heart bleeding through.

It's epic, I'll give you that... The lyrics are good but unless you have a bridge in there it might be too much for someone to take lyric wise, too long I mean.

Awesome song, but why are all the songs on here so depressing and dark?

Because anyone can write an identikit pop-idol style love song

Real, true emotive songs are usually not all that bright and fluffy.

Jester has a point.

And thank you for all the comments.

And Jester, in reply to your first comment, the "I can't hide all the pain" part after the 2nd chorus is the bridge, it just isn't long.

Mark it as a bridge then