find it ( advice wanted) not finished

i feel your lips on my cheek.
that kiss just made me dead and weak.
i thought of you all night and everyday.
It started out in the end of may.

you left me in the parking lot.
standing there wit my mind in a blot.
the night was done until the next day.
i wud try to find a girl to come nd play.

Find it , Mind it
Just rewind it
back to the day
that it happened at the end of may.

The rhyming on the verses comes too quick...


Putting in "lot" before "blot" and "day" before "play" makes the song look a bit rushed... Sorry but making the song lyrics less couplet-ey would make it look a bit better.