Un sentence translation por me por favor!

You have replaced Gods place in my human heart, Its like the world comes to a stand still when your voice penetrates and echoes throughout the lingering people.

lol, that's a pretty odd sentence

You have replaced Gods place in my human heart
has sustituido el lugar de Dios en mi corazón humano

Its like the world comes to a stand still when your voice penetrates
es como si el mundo llegara a un paro completo cuando tu voz penetra

and echoes throughout the lingering people
y se hace eco en todas las personas que no se van (que permanecen por mucho tiempo o personas persistentes)

Really, u think its odd?...yeah I suppose it is..thanks for your help again istanbul. Salud!

I don't think it's an odd sentence at all, poetic yes. At any rate, we're not here to judge, simply to help.

You're welcome.