little love song

Chorus:
And there is never a moment to wait
No there is never a moment to wait
Oh there is never a moment to wait
But if there were I’d give that moment to you

When the rain is pouring down
I picture you on a cloud
And when the thunder shakes the ground
I imagine you made sound

Chorus:
And when the ocean’s calm and gray
I think you have stopped the waves
And when the sun slowly drifts away
I believe that you ended the day

Chorus:
And when the leaves turn brown and red
I believe it was something you said
And as I drift off now to bed
I know you’ll live on inside my head

Chorus:

copyrite 2008

The verses have too many rhyming couplets
they sound too manufactured pop to have any real emotion conveyed.

I like the last three verses, very poetic. The first verse (or is it the chorus?) doesnt fit well. The message of this love song should be that she wants to spend every moment with this guy because she loves him. It should be...

"And there is never a moment to wait
For every moment Im dreaming of you'

or something like that. It would fit better with the rest of the song in my opinion.