Ghost of Midnight Hall (please comment)

Ok, this is one I wrote a long time ago. It was my second poem/song. Very dramatic and cheesy, but very fun writing. He he

The Ghost of Midnight Hall

Silence creeps across The Midnight hall
There’s a shadow on the wall
“I come at night, I come alone
To you a warning I loan
I’m The Ghost of Midnight Hall

I’ve lived for years within these walls
I’ve seen the banquets in the halls
I am silent
I am cunning
Down the stairs to watch them fall
I’m The Ghost of Midnight Hall

I’ve seen generations pass on
And all they think about is fun
But you stay true
You stay loyal
And you’ll not go as they do
I’m The Ghost of Midnight Hall

I’ve watched the battles being fought
I watched the treasures being sought
But you don’t fight
And you don’t war
Swords are clashing, swords are drawn
I’m the Ghost of Midnight Hall

But now the morning is coming
I’m sorry, but I am going
You must go too
Farewell, goodbye!
But don’t forget my warnings
I’m The Ghost of Midnight Hall”

It does seem more like a poem. but the lyrics are great, although i don't like the last verse that much. I read it to my brother and he said "I recon it's actually quite good"