"The Same" pleeze comment!!!!!"

My sister gave me this idea, and wanted me to use the last two lines in the second verse I don't really like the bridges, but yeah, whatever.Here it is:

“The Same”

Verse-
I had it going for me
I had the world bowing to my face
Yeah, with the cameras flashing
And then suddenly I saw it fade

Verse bridge-
I said I’d breakaway
And live the glamorous life
Now look at me today
My foundation’s about to die

Chorus-
They said to do something different
To do something more
But I found it slipping
I saw it shut the door
I felt my voice in the lights
I heard my fans chanting my name
But I must not have been that bright
Or it’d still be the same

Verse-
My face was on the post cards
And then I felt myself going down
You can shoot for the stars
But make sure you’re firmly on the ground

Verse bridge-
I said I’d breakaway
Be the biggest star they’ve known
Now look at me today
I’m the worst that’s ever shown

Chorus

Actual Bridge-

Now let it fade another way
Let it go to someone else
I had my few minutes of fame
Now I gotta do something else

Chorus

it's good, I agree with you about the bridges, they're not bad, but somehow they don't fit in to the song, at least for me
but the song is good

He he. thanks anyway. I'll have to wok on it. Actually the hardest part in writing songs ,for me, is the chorus. I never like doing them and they always sound bad.

I find it much easier to start with the chorus. I on;y write a song when I have a good idea for a chorus.