Let Me Rest In Peace (comment please :P)

ah, lyrics are the best to write when your bored, or depressed :X
but nah, that one was a bored :P
A little deathish song, but whatever "^^ (its also a short one)


Let Me Rest In Peace

Run away, do you fear me? i'm not much a threat.
If i died - you can't see me, i'm gone in the air.
So why'd you pretend to be talking along,
While i'm gone and you can't see a thing!?

I'm just a ghost...
Ive got nothing here,
just idiot humans who claimed ive been seen!
I'm just an illusion it makes no conclusion
i'm dead and thats all i can feel!

Surrounded by lies, i'm so sick of you guys..
please listen to my voice, won't you hear my advice?!
Just find your love, get your life, it's really that simple,
so get the hell outta my face!

I'm just a human being...
a little bit dead then before - so it seems!
just give me your roses, and leave me alone,
That's what the phrase "Rest In Peace" means!

I can say it and I like the lyrics, but I can't say just how good it sounds, because I can't really tell how I'd be singing along without knowing the melody, but yeah, not bad lyrics.

Well, it's certainly a good idea, but I'm not fond of using not-so-nice language in songs, somehow it ruins the beauty of them.I would like it a lot better if you skipped out that one phrase in the third verse.. But other than that, cool. I like the second line of the last verse.

hmmm thanks, and yea, I'm not using a good english >.>
i'm trying tho... :X

about the melody,
It was hard to find one >.>
but still, I cant sing :S
my voice is dead..


anyways, thanks, i'll try to do better next time "^^

No, no, no, except for that one phrase, you did extremely well. It has a lot of good qualities. You did a great job. Why did you write it? Did it just sound like a good idea? or was it some how referring to you or some one you know? or what?

whoa, thanks

I'm not sure why did I write it actually.. I think I just like the idea of talking about ghosts and dead people - from their side.

I wish I had a band or something I could record it... Or at least someone that can sing :P

anyways, thanks again

Originally Posted by Patatuli

whoa, thanks

I'm not sure why did I write it actually.. I think I just like the idea of talking about ghosts and dead people - from their side.

I wish I had a band or something I could record it... Or at least someone that can sing :P

anyways, thanks again

*cough*me*cough* :P

ooooh you can sing?

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