Everyone is crazy but me (Please comment?)

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  1. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Everyone Else is Crazy But Me

    Turn-downs,
    Turn-ups,
    Turn-in,
    Turns-out,
    Everyone is crazy but me...

    [Instrumental]

    The compulsory accessories,
    Never meant much to me,
    Another person’s perception,
    Back into the inventory,
    ‘Cause they’re not me...

    The overly important,
    The re-possessed,
    These conversations,
    Lack interest,
    I can’t grasp it see...

    Everyone is crazy,
    And it’s sending me insane,
    What a civilization,
    What a sweet terrain,
    These broken bottles,
    Bottle up the brain,
    Splashing around,
    In the falling rain...


    Put down the bottle,
    Come back inside,
    Because you’re committing,
    Social suicide,
    You’re never going to make history...

    You have a brain,
    But you’re promiscuous,
    You’re lifestyle,
    Is continuous,
    You won’t make it to 33...

    Everyone is crazy,
    And it’s sending me insane,
    What a civilization,
    What a sweet terrain,
    These broken bottles,
    Bottle up the brain,
    Splashing around,
    In the falling rain...


    You wake,
    You shop,
    You eat,
    You get off,
    You go out,
    You get in,
    You get drunk,
    You has-been

    Everyone is crazy,
    And it’s sending me insane,
    What a civilization,
    What a sweet terrain,
    These broken bottles,
    Bottle up the brain,
    Splashing around,
    In the falling rain...


    Everyone is crazy...
    Everyone is crazy...
    Everyone is crazy...
    BUT ME!

    Not one of my best, but I can't get to my better ones at the moment. What do you think?
    Last edited by Rabbitdrive; 07-28-2008 at 11:01 AM.
     
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    Acheramee said:

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    LOL, like this part

    Everyone is crazy,
    And it’s sending me insane,
    What a civilization,
    What a sweet terrain,
    These broken bottles,
    Bottle up the brain,
    Splashing around,
    In the falling rain...

    anyway, very original. It reminds me of a song I wrote that I called "Everything But Me". As usual, it was a sad love song type, any way, sidetracked again, I like it. Good Job.
     
  3. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Thanks for that.

    Ooh! I've just found another in my notebook... I think I'll put it up too...
     
  4. Smaltonian said:

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    Rabbit

    If you have hectic music this will work great.....Alot of great lines...albeit short but punchy and powerful..........

    Steve Altonian
     
  5. Rabbitdrive said:

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    It would be filled with catchy drum beats to keep it powerful and the instrumental would lengthen the song overall.
     
  6. Fight4nothing said:

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    Its funny yet serious!!! your my hero! Love the chorus and How you approach the topic is different. anyways i'm crazy (apparently)
     
  7. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Tank 'oo. And yes... yes you are...