A Simple Sorry

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  1. Rabbitdrive said:

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    A Simple Sorry

    This is my mindset,
    You are embroidering,
    This is not lively,
    This is just boring...

    And I lied,
    When I said,
    I’d like to go on a date with you,
    But my mind,
    Wasn’t straight,
    And rebounding is an awful thing to do.

    So I’m sorry,
    For any misconceptions,
    And I’m sorry,
    For many loose connections,
    But my head is playful,
    And my mind is blank,
    And my dreams – distorted,
    And my ship – it sank,
    But when I’m bored,
    I like to look for things to do,
    And unfortunately,
    That thing was you...


    [Piano Instrumental]

    I’m open,
    To new ideas,
    I can’t help it,
    If my mind interferes...

    I am playful,
    I’m over the top,
    But I don’t like seeing people disappointed,
    I’m not a toolset,
    Waiting to be used,
    No, I’m not holy and anointed.

    So I’m sorry,
    For any misconceptions,
    And I’m sorry,
    For many loose connections,
    But my head is playful,
    And my mind is blank,
    And my dreams – distorted,
    And my ship – it sank,
    But when I’m bored,
    I like to look for things to do,
    And unfortunately,
    That thing was you...


    And I’m sorry,
    For any pain I’ve caused,
    But break-up’s,
    Are naturally forced,
    My mind can’t,
    Cope with many things,
    Not one for,
    Playing Kings and Queens...

    I heard a simple sorry goes a long way,
    So here I am apologizing today...
    I heard a simple sorry goes a long way,
    So here I am apologizing today...
    I heard a simple sorry goes a long way,
    So here I am apologizing today...
    I heard a simple sorry goes a long way,
    So here I am apologizing today...

    So I’m sorry,
    For any misconceptions,
    And I’m sorry,
    For many loose connections,
    But my head is playful,
    And my mind is blank,
    And my dreams – distorted,
    And my ship – it sank,
    But when I’m bored,
    I like to look for things to do,
    And unfortunately,
    That thing was you...


    And unfortunately,
    That thing was you...


    Yeah... Not a brilliant one, but I'm not that good with the sadder songs, so I'm giving you a piece of my dodgy work and asking you to help me improve it. Thanx.
     
  2. Patatuli said:

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    Very nice song
    I think you could make the chorus a little bit shorter, I liked the part

    "But when I’m bored,
    I like to look for things to do,
    And unfortunately,
    That thing was you..."
     
  3. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Tank oo.

    Should I just cut out the :

    "But my head is playful,
    And my mind is blank,
    And my dreams – distorted,
    And my ship – it sank,"

    bit?