start of a new one

so these arnt finished but i want opinions on how it is so far

With You
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With Don’t Let me fall, ‘less it’s falling for you
‘Cuz I am in love and I think you are too
And every hour of every day,
You know just the words to say
to make me…feel this love (ohhhh feel this love)
To make me …feel… your love

with you, with you,
I swear it’s true
with you, with you
with you


Hold me close and never let go,
Lets stay together and watch our love grow
I feel your trembling fingertips
at that moment when we touch lips
And it makes… me feel… alive (makes me feel alive)
And now… we are.. alive

with you, with you,
I swear it’s true
with you, with you
with you

Very repetitive. Is it supposed to be slow? If not or mediocre, then perhaps put an instrumental break in or another verse and you'll be getting there.