Class - "Tu ai plecat" - HELP

Corrections please, thanks guys!

"Tu ai plecat"

Tu ai plecat, de mine te-ascunzi
You left, you hide from me
Te-ai suparat, nu vrei sa m-auzi,
You got mad, you don't want to hear me
Nu vrei sa m-asculti
You don't want to listen to me
Stiu ca am gresit
I know that I messed up/failed/made a mistake
De-atatea ori te-am mintit...
I lied to you so many times

I:
Imi amintesc
I remember
Ce imi spuneam de-atatea ori
That you would tell me so many times
Sa te iubesc,
that I love you,
Sa te ating atunci cand dormi
that I touch you when you sleep
Dar acum
But now
Totul e prea tarziu, stii bine
Everything is too late, you know very well
Nu mai poti
You can no longer
Sa te intorci acum la mine...
return now to me

Refren(x2):..

II:
De ce nu vezi
Why don't you see
Ca am nevoie de tine ?
That I need you?
In casa-i gol
It's empty in the house
Daca tu nu mai esti cu mine
If you're no longer with me
Nu mai pot
I can no longer
Sa mai indur tacerea ta
bear the silence any more
As da orice
I'd give anything
Doar sa aud vocea ta...
But I don't hear your voice

De ce suferim atat daca totul e intamplator
Why should(?) we suffer so much if everything is accidental/casual(?)
Si daca dragostea e ceva trecator ?
& if love is some passerby?
Si daca nu crezi ca poti sa iubesti
& if you don't believe you can love
De ce te feresti si te amagesti ?
Why do you get happy and deceive yourself?
Mai bine vino si spune ca ma iubestï...
You better come & tell me that you love me

Again very well Just a few things:

Ce imi spuneam de-atatea ori
What I used to tell myself so many times
Sa te iubesc,
To love you,
Sa te ating atunci cand dormi
to touch you when you sleep (It goes like this: "I used to tell myself to love you, to touch you when you sleep")

Sa mai indur tacerea ta
bear your silence any more

Doar sa aud vocea ta...
Just to hear your voice

De ce suferim atat daca totul e intamplator
Why do we suffer so much if everything is accidental/casual
Si daca dragostea e ceva trecator ?
& if love is something momentary?

De ce te feresti si te amagesti ?
Why do you guard(protect) yourself and deceive yourself?

Yay, I hope I'm getting better, I think that what I mess up on most is phrases & tenses.

Now I can go to sleep.

Noapte buna!!!

or buna seara???

hmmmm....lol

You are getting better!

And, if you want my opinion, it's not tenses or phrases that you mistake, it's just the fact that you don't pay attention to all the words and sometimes you confuse them.

Like in this text " te feresti" you probably read the first letters and thought it must have something to do with "fericire" so you moved on

And I bet that when you saw many of my corrections, you told yourself: "of course, I knew that".

Which only proves my point You make progress! If you got to the point when you feel you can hurry in translating something it means you have enough knowledge to afford that!

Ok, so...Noapte Bună ! Hmmm.... on what continent are you situated? Cause on this one it's noon

Yup, everythign you said is very true! I rush & make silly mistakes.

& as for the nopate buna...I'm in North America, so I guess it should be buna dimineata, even though I'm just goign to sleep.

I'll make it easier on both of us...

BUN RAMAS!!!

& thanks for all the help

You're welcome again

And, Bun Rămas is ok. Also La revedere.

And I could tell you Somn ușor-- Sleep tight.