Can Someone help me with a title?

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  1. MarcusDuncan said:

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    oh oh ooooooooh
    yea yea yea
    mmm mmm

    (verse1)
    my heart is trapped in the dark
    set to break from the very start
    nobody knows just how i feel
    never thought this urge would be so real

    (subverse)
    i will cross that river
    from here to the other side
    my best will be shown
    make my heart here reknown

    (chorus)
    i'm gunna break my heart free
    from this pain thats so deep
    keep my faith to find my way
    bring light to my darkend day
    the sun will shine on me again
    yes it will shine

    (verse2)
    i will get there
    to this day that i long for
    somehow i will start a new
    i will join the group of the few

    (subverse)
    i will cross that river
    from here to the other side
    my best will be shown
    make my heart here reknown

    (chorus)
    i'm gunna break my heart free
    from this pain thats so deep
    keep my faith to find my way
    bring light to my darkend day
    the sun will shine on me again
    yes it will shine

    (verse3)
    now nothing can get in my way
    there is not a damn thing you can say
    i'll break out of these chains
    cause i have no limitations

    (subverse)
    i will cross that river
    from here to the other side
    my best will be shown
    make my heart here reknown

    (chorus)
    i'm gunna break my heart free
    from this pain thats so deep
    keep my faith to find my way
    bring light to my darkend day
    the sun will shine on me again
    yes it will shine

    (Hook)
    i turn my life from night to day
    no matter what i'm gunna make it
    to the other side or this darkend world
    the light will shine on my heart again
    yes it will shine, you hear me
    On my heart it will be SHINING!!

    (subverse)
    i will cross that river
    from here to the other side
    my best will be shown
    make my heart here reknown

    (chorus)
    i'm gunna break my heart free
    from this pain thats so deep
    keep my faith to find my way
    bring light to my darkend day
    the sun will shine on me again
    yes it will shine

    (ending)
    man, i can already feel it now
    my heart turning warm
    the light shines brightly on me
    the chains are gone, as well the darkness
    one day we all will be in the light
    yes, the light will shine on us all
    we will all get there.
     
  2. Rabbitdrive said:

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    "Alight" maybe? I like the song. The oh oh ooooooooh, yea yea yea, mmm mmm bit at the top made me lol. :P
     
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    CelestialSushi said:

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    A hope-filled song...how about "The Sun Will Shine" or "Break My Heart Free" if you want something taken directly from the song? Or how about "Sunlit Freedom" if you want to use the theme as inspiration?
     
  4. texter-bernd said:

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    Hi,

    when you've got a hook line use it! From that point of view the only sensible option here is "break my heart free".

    Cheers,
    (and btw I like it)

    Bernd