"Who You Are">PLEASE COMMENT

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    Acheramee said:

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    Didn't know where else to put it, so breathe in breathe out, here's my song.

    Who You Are
    Ever wonder why your shadow is so small
    Because we throw away what’s worth and count the rest as all
    We sit around and paint pictures in the sky
    To block out thoughts that tell us to do right

    Chorus:
    Because we didn’t hold your hand
    To make sure we would stand
    And we didn’t call your name
    Instead we drifted away
    Oh, Lord, how could we fall so far?
    We’ve forgotten who you are

    Ever think about the days we used to know
    Happy days, Oh happy days, before faith started to go
    We took advantage of the mercies that fell like hail
    Then we wondered why our dreams suddenly failed

    Chorus:
    Because we didn’t hold your hand
    To make sure we would stand
    And we didn’t call on your name
    I guess we wanted to drift away
    Oh, Lord, how could we fall so far?
    We’ve forgotten who you are

    Oh, Lord how could we fall so far?
    We put our faith in the stars
    We’ve forgotten who you are









    It's pretty self explanatory, I also have a fairly nice tune to go with it. I'm proud of it, can't you tell?LOL. Tell me what you think
     
  2. NaChO's Avatar

    NaChO said:

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    it's cool
     
  3. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    I really like it, i like the way your not afraid to admit what you've done and your not going on about what someone has done to you. Most songs are about someone being mad at someone for something and making themselves seem totally innocent, but you know the person being blamed has their story that makes you feel sorry for them.