I will make it - my song but i need help with the chorus =]

this a lil rap song i wrote people but need help with the chorus cause i cudnt come up wit any thing smart, catchy or even just plain........so if ya can an wan ta please help an leave comments

Say ma name, say ma name cause I’m about to drop
I’m gonna enter this game and make my way to the top
and aint nothing taking me down cause I’m headed uptown
a new legend born, hip hops hero, I’m off to claim my crown
unfazed, don’t forget haters what goes around comes around
soon I’ll be a name everybody know
competition I’ll huff, puff and blow
you’ll be amazed with how well I flow
how well I rhyme, the meaning of my words
and the message I bring across
I’m here to tell you no matter what I will make it
we can make it, no matter what colour you can make it
you just gotta commit that’s why I give my all, spit legit
therefore I will never fall but instead stand tall
as I show the world what I’m all about
the talent I hold, running for the gold, now the story unfolds

CHORUS????

I’m here bout to show you me, about to do my business
still sleeping so I dream big, possibilities endless, painless
action less and you will get nowhere
that’s why I talk about what I know, what I feel, spit legit
I don’t brag about things I don’t have, don’t see the point
in tryna disappoint the viewers, listeners and potential buyers
they want to know real, how I feel, true emotions I will reveal
rip my chest open, in order for my music to appeal
to each and every one of them like the talents of Eminem
he gets them sitting back and listening to his words
he could go a whole song without swearing and still sell a million records
making himself a legend as from everyone he receives handfuls of awards
so all you have to do is commit that’s why I give my all, spit legit
therefore I will never fall but instead stand tall
as I show the world what I’m all about
the talent I hold, running for the gold, now the story unfolds

CHORUS???

now the dream starts with a pen in my hand
the future planned out here I stand
cause sometimes you just gotta believe
cause talent can only get that far
life is full of surprises even if its planned
that’s why nothing is ever for granted
so I expect to be rejected and neglected
but fate has it I will be respected
resurrected, in the history books I’ll be expected
cause why compete if you don’t want to win
why compete if you’re just gonna accept defeat
who wants to be remembered as a has been
that’s why to my work I commit, give my all, never quit
therefore I will never fall but instead stand tall
as I show the world what I’m all about
the talent I hold, running for the gold, now the story unfolds

well it's not my style of lyrics, though I like listening to rap, if I knew how to write rap I would help, sorry.

Well Im not really much of a rapper but I love writing lyrics so I ll give it a try just give me some credit if you make it to the top?

I'll do whatever it take to make it to the top,
I drop any mother****er who thinks Im going to flop.
I will make it, I dont care what it takes,
Break every bone in your body just to prove your fake.
I dont have much but i have my mind,
A lyrical poet who you just cant find.

Those lyrics are pretty lame to be honest, but I think pretty much all rap lyrics that have come out in the last few years are lame.