Little Miss Atittude - My song please review

Thread: Little Miss Atittude - My song please review

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  1. Jean1singer said:

    Default Little Miss Atittude - My song please review

    Ok, so I wrote this song. It's way different than my usual type of lyrics, but I was really frusterated. So please review even if it's as simple as; It's bad OR it's good.
    Here it is:

    things happen
    life goes wrong
    but why wait and dwell on them
    we should just move on

    sometimes you wake up
    and you realize
    you want your dream to go on
    cause it's better than real life!

    ♥How come, it's always about you
    stuck up, your little miss attitude
    get what you want, cause you always do
    don't want, anything to do with you♥


    life goes on! (on on on)
    Life goes on! (on on on---)

    So what?
    it was one of those days
    You go lost
    in your different personalities
    two faced
    cause to you it's the craze
    (it's the craze!)

    ♥How come, it's always about you
    stuck up, your little miss attitude
    get what you want, cause you always do
    don't want, anything to do with you♥

    (HOW COME?)

    ♥How come, it's always about you
    stuck up, your little miss attitude
    get what you want, cause you always do
    don't want, anything to do with you♥

    don't want anything to do with you!

    ♥How come, it's always about you
    stuck up, your little miss attitude
    get what you want, cause you always do
    don't want, anything to do with you♥

    Little miss, attitude
     
  2. Jean1singer said:

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    anything I need to change or fix, help please.??
     
  3. captainjackle said:

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    Lol, i jsut happened to pick another one of yours =P....i was just going threw them and deicided this one sounded cool, and then i noticed i posted on another one of yours. But yah again I really like this one, and i dont really have much negative to say. Again the lyrics flow really well, im starting to see your pretty good at making that happen. Tha pattern is a little weird, to me at least because I like mine to have a certian structure, but it works out quite nicely actually.
    The only advice i could give you is to make then middle a little bit more meaty. At one part you have your chorus, then two words, then your chorus again, one line, and then chorus again. Inbetween those first two choruses i mentioned i would add more lyrics, make that a very emotional part of your song.