Living Nightmare [C+CC!]

It's been a long time since I've posted..
Anyway, here's a new song!
Please leave comments!

Living Nightmare

Well it's scaring,
it's tearing,
the breath out of me.
It's haunting,
it's taunting,
Get away from me!

I'm living in a nightmare,
an eternal scare.
Can't get away from there,
I run but go nowhere.

I'm living a nightmare!
(Nightmare!)

Well I hear it,
I feel it,
burning through me.
I hate it,
can't take it,
Get away from me!

I'm living in a nightmare,
an eternal scare.
Can't get away from there,
I run but go nowhere.
Running from a dream,
much more than it seems.
Can't even scream,
someone save me...

I'm living a nightmare!
(Nightmare!)

Such a dark place.
Can't even see my hands.
My vision soon fades,
yet here I stand.

(I hear it,
I feel it) <--- During first two lines.
(I hate it,
Can't take it.) <--- During last two lines.

I'm living in a nightmare,
an eternal scare.
Can't get away from there,
I run but go nowhere.
Running from a dream,
much more than it seems.
Can't even scream,
someone save me...

'cause I'm living in a nightmare,
an eternal scare.
Can't get away from there,
I run but go nowhere.
Running from a dream,
much more than it seems.
Can't even scream,
someone save me...

Living in a nightmare!
(Nightmare!)
Living in a nightmare!
(Nightmare!)
Living in a nightmare!
(Nightmare!)

its my style i like it..!

Thanks. It was out of the usual writing for me.
More comments appreciated! :P

Jim, I shall keep that in mind.
I think I might rewrite it later with the questions you asked.
But they can always be answered in a music video ;P
Haha.. But that could take a while to get to...