Dial 6 For Love

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December 4th 2008

I have finally found out a title for my next song:

Dial 6 For Love

It is going to be a sad depressing romantic song...!

Depressing is one of my themes... I am really good at it!
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thanx
now i know at least 2 people who know talent when they see it

Dial 6 For Love
A (Second) Song By Saad Usmani


My heart is crazy for love
That day she gave a hug…
It felt so right…
I just want to hold her tight!
So when you feel the love
All you do is –
Dial 6 For Love!
She’ll come to you…
Dial 6 For Love!
You’ll love her too…
Dial 6 For Love!

When the days are shorter
My heart comes closer
To you!
When the days last longer
My heart beats faster
To you!
The signs are right
Like love at first sight
Now all you have to do is
Dial 6 For Love!
Then she’ll come to you
Dial 6 For Love!
And you’ll love her too

The bird’s eyes start gleaming
Just like when I’m dreaming
About you…
The flowers start blooming
My heart starts zooming
For you…
And when the time is right
Dial 6 For Love!
Then she’ll come to you!
Dial 6 For Love!
And you’ll love her too

The sun starts shining
Very bright, very nice
Then I see you crying
Taking the chance by rolling the dice

Don’t do it!
You’re gonna cry more
Don’t do it!
Just step outside of the door
Oh, you’re gonna crash and burn
Don’t do it!
You better stop and learn
But where’d that saying go?
When you laugh, I say so
That you should-

Dial 6 For Love!
You’ve gotta learn to love
Dial 6 For Love!
You forgot my hug!
Dial 6 For Love!
My heart beats faster
Dial 6 For Love!
When the days are longer
Dial 6 For Love!
When my heart comes closer
Dial 6 For Love!
When the days are shorter

Before you go soon…
All I have to say is that
I love you…

Dial 6 For Love!
Dial 6 For Love!
Dial 6 For Love…. (Fades)

thanks! you have really good lyrics also...

(WE SHOULD START A BAND)

Its got good rhymes and a decent hook, but theres nothing about it that really makes me want to hear it played, I feel like I've heard this song 1000 times before, but its your call.

Luck

Originally Posted by DonFortunato

Its got good rhymes and a decent hook, but theres nothing about it that really makes me want to hear it played, I feel like I've heard this song 1000 times before, but its your call.

Luck

thanks for the critique
I just wanted to tell you that it's the story about a guy who like a girl but one day the girls starts doing drugs and eventually she dies, and at the end he tells her that he loves her, and he says "dial 6 For Love" because he wants everyone to have a chance at whatever type of love you believe in...

so i'm just saying, I really don't hear songs like that, and if they do please tell me so i can get other ideas.

She "Game" you a hug? hehe couple grammar mistakes

fixed lol
THANX