Animal in me

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  1. 4 shades of reason said:

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    ANIMAL IN ME

    Hello friend of those who resent me

    I feel you and all the hate your sending

    Beating deep from within me

    I'm sick and feel my body failing

    Oh my docter tells me

    I'm perfectly healthy

    But he has not seen the animal i can be

    My own perfect enemy

    /Please help me i'm pleading

    I'm fighting its growing and i'm seeing

    I hear it ploting and deciving

    But i don't feel it leaving

    So i'm sitting and just breathing

    I see what i don't want to be becoming part of me/

    Breath in breath out

    I want to scream and to shout

    Gotta keep it in Can't let it out

    Just hold on hold out

    Can't keep this massacus you sent me

    This friend of those who resent me

    I'm fine my doctor tells me i'm perfectly healthy

    But he has not seen the animal i can be

    maybe he will see my own perfect enemy

    /Please help me i'm pleading

    I'm fighting its growing and i'm seeing

    I hear it ploting and deciving

    But i don't feel it leaving

    So i'm sitting and just breathing

    I see what i don't want to be becoming part of me/

    Hello doctor i know what your going to tell me

    But i'm not perfectly heathy

    Help me with this affinaty then tell me

    What are the posabilatys that i'v become my own perfect enemy
     
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    rocky89 said:

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    sup bro, good song, what genre do u go for tho, cause 98% of this rhyme ends in a rhyme with me, like enemy, healthy, breathing n so on, what genre u goin for here, let me know ill help you write em out. lataz
     
  3. 4 shades of reason said:

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    well i wright mostle like rock alternative lyrics but i have and can wright in any genra and ya i know the ryhme is limited in this one but thats the way i wanted it read some of my other stuff its not as repedative
     
  4. 4 shades of reason said:

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    but ya this and all that i have posted are rock