This is my first post on this site/forum.
I write all the time and,now,I finally have that feeling of wanting to know what other people think.I wrote this about a week ago.I still keep adding,and changing things,but for now it seems like I have it.


She watches me all through the night,her eyes are like lasers shined by an army of one,she's fragile yet deadly.This mockery of what we all are 'human beings' just something for someone else to see.She is yet a big part of me.Half my heart is hers and it still beats...So please,if you loved me you'd



Follow me into this darkness..So follow me into this dark--ness.Your foolish eyes say that you can honestly care less.So pick apart,but try your very best,and as bad as I feel I'll love you non the less.My heart is battered you put it to the test,and yet I still swore that your the queen who fits this puzzle in my quest....



I watch her all through the day.She hides behind her past and I pray.If she has any life left let it out today.Because 'I cant take this' and I will say...It ends tonight.With midnight goodbye kiss,that when it hits my lips will continue to pulsate and my life in its weak form will begin to cunfuldge ...And at the edge of this cliff with the world held tightly in your grasp...you will let go...And once again your past will sho-a-woo.



So follow me into this darkness..So follow me into this dark--ness.Your foolish eyes say that you can honestly care less.So pick me apart but try your very best,and as bad as I feel I'll love you non the less.My heart is battered you've put it to the test,and yet I still swore that your the queen who fits this puzzle for my quest...



''' I will set my fever aside''''tell me lover what do you feel?(Tell me lover what do you feel?)Is it you who is the only one to kill..My lover you swallowed me just like a pill.and in six short seconds surely you'll be ill.....and it ends tonight.....


Thank you for reading,and giving your opinion.(Sorry about any mis-spellings)