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"Ma doare fara tine"
It hurts without you

Intre 4 pereti nu mai pot sa astept
Between four walls I can no longer wait
Multe ganduri apar, alte vise dispar
Many thoughts appear, other dreams disappear
Ard ca o torta dar am inca forta si
They burn like a torch but I still have the strength &
Noptzile gri nici cum nu ma pot opri
The grey nights can't stop me in any way
Cercul se strange cred k mi`ajunge shi strig..
The circle assembles I believe that it overtakes me & I scream

Refren:

Ma doare fara tineeeeee...
It hurts without you
Cum renuntzi asha ushor..
How you renounce so easily
Ma doare fara tineeeeee..
It hurts without you
De privirea ta mi-e dor..
I miss your gaze

Fiecare minut ma apasa mai mult..
Each minute weighs me down more
Ma pierd in amintiri nu mai pot sa respir
I get lost in memories, I can no longer breathe
Plutesc pe o mare si nu am scapare
I float on the sea & I don't have an escape
Imaginea nostra apare in gandul meu..
The image of us appears in my mind
Alerg catre tine in vise m-auzi cum te chem..
I run towards you in dreams, you hear how I call you

Stiu ca am greshit
I know that I messed up
Dar in sfarshit ma vei ierta
But in the end, you'll forgive me


"Visator" - Laurentiu Duta
Dreamer

E prea devreme sau e prea tarziu ?
Is it too early or is it too late?
Vremea a trecut si prea putine stiu,
Time has passed & too few I know
Enigma mea.
My puzzle
Sunt ca un vapor pierdut in larg.
I'm like a ship lost in open sea
Mi-e teama ca n-ajung , niciodata la mal.
I'm scared I'll never reach the shore

Refren.
De ce vrei sa ma vezi ratacind printre stazi,
Why do you want to see me wandering amongst streets
Ca un vagabond?
like a vagabond?
De ce vrei sa imi iei visele si sa pleci,
Why do you want to take my dreams & leave
Chiar nu-ti pasa deloc ?
Don;t you even care at all?
Sunt doar un om , un visator ,sunt doar un om,
I'm just a man, a dreamer, I'm just a man
ooo,ce te iubeste enorm.
that loves you very much

Ca strigi in zadar vreodata ai simtit?
Did you ever feel what you screamed in vain?
Te scuturi de praf si-ncepi sa te ridici.
You dust yourself off & begin to get up
Vrei doar sa mergi.
You only want to go
Nimic din ce-a fost nu va mai fi
Nothing from what was will no longer be
Prezentul e trecut , presarat cu amintiri.
The present is past, scattered with memories

Here you are Good translations

Noptile gri nicicum nu ma pot opri
The gray nights can't stop me in any way

Vremea a trecut si prea putine stiu,
Time has passed & too few I know

De ce vrei sa ma vezi ratacind printre stazi,
Why do you want to see me wandering amongst streets (correct!)


Prezentul e trecut , presarat cu amintiri.
The present is past, scattered with memories

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