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    DeBaires said:

    Default Corrections please!

    Mersi anticipat, prieteni!

    1) Vagabond - "Deja Vu"

    Tot cerul era al meu si marea
    All of the sky & sea was mine
    Si simteam ceva in privirea ta
    & I felt something in your stare
    Altcandva
    Another time

    Nici pic de culoare nu a mai ramas
    Not even a bit of color has remained
    Poate nici un ceas
    Maybe not even an hour
    O iubire fara glas
    A voiceless love

    Urasc privirea ta
    I hate your stare
    Pierduta undeva
    Lost somewhere
    Imi spui doar nu
    You only tell me no
    Iubīre deja vu
    Love deja vu (already seen)



    2) Vagabond - "Vagabond"

    De cand te-am vazut,mi-ai placut
    Since I saw you, I liked you
    Am simtit timpul oprit
    I felt time stop
    Si seara de seara la scara
    Night after night, in (your) staircase
    Te astept,e perfect
    I wait for you, it's perfect

    Astept o minune,pe bune,
    I wait for a miracle, a good one (?)
    Intr-o zi poate te vei opri
    One day maybe you'll stop
    A spus ca-i sta bine cu mine
    You said you'd stay with me forever (?)
    Si un vecin, din senin.
    & a neighbor, from a clear sky

    Ref:
    Ca un vagabond, prin vise eu ratacesc
    Like a vagabond, through dreams I wander
    Ca un nebun,cu tine simt ca traiesc
    Like a crazyman, with you I feel that I live
    Un vagabond,cu stelele eu vorbesc
    A vagabond, with the stars I talk
    Ca un nebun,nebun te iubesc
    Like a crazyman, crazyman, I love you


    3) Vagabond - "Normal"

    Pot uita orice
    I can forget anything
    Dar nu pot sa te uit pe tine
    But I can't only forget you
    Am incercat mereu sa te am
    I always tried to have you
    Dar tu ai avut alt program...
    But you had another plan

    Poate, ai vrea sa stii ce-i acum cu mine
    Maybe, you'd want to know what's wrong with me now
    Dar nu-i nevoie sa-ti spun ca vreau inima ta
    But it's not necessary to tell you that I want your heart
    Ai inteles ce-mi doresc, stii bine
    You understood what I want, you know very well
    Dar voi avea rabdare...
    But I'll have patience

    Stiu ca e normal sa ma refuzi o data,
    I know it's normal for you to reject once
    Esti mult prea ocupata dar voi insista
    You're much too busy, but I'll insist
    E normal, te porti ca o straina
    It's normal, you behave like a stranger
    Agenda ta e plina dar te voi suna.
    Your agenda is full, but I'm gonna call you

    Ai intrat in joc,
    You entered a game
    Si cred ca nu-ti pasa chiar deloc
    & I bleieve that you don't even care at all
    Zambind ai refuzat cu vorbe reci
    Smiling, you've rejected me with cold words
    In agenda ta sa ma trecī.
    In your agenda you pass me (my name) by


    4) Vagabond - "Te-am pierdut"

    Te-am pierdut ,drumul e pustiu
    I lost you, the road is empty
    Sunt doar un strain,ratacit prin viata
    I'm just a stranger, wandering through life
    Te-am pierdut,dar poate candva ne vom revedea
    I lost you, but maybe some day we'll see each other again
    Si-mi vei spune ca tu iubesti un hoinar.
    & you'll tell me that you love a loser

    Amintiri,dezamagiri,
    Memories, disappointments
    Te-am ranit prea mult..dar..
    I hurt you too much, but
    Vreau sa stii nu am vrut.
    I want you to know I didn't want to
    Lacrimi ce au curs,
    Tears that have flowed
    Oare nu-s de-ajuns?
    Am I really not enough?
    Si oare,oare chiar m-ai uitat,
    & have you really, really just forgotten me?
    De cand am plecat?
    Ever since I left?

    Oare nu vrei sa stii?
    Do you really not want to know?
    (Nu vrei sa stii..)
    Ce fac eu zi de zi
    What I do day after day?
    Si cand ma gandesc...
    & when I think
    ..Te-am pierdut..
    I lost you

    Amintiri,dezamagiri,
    Memories, disappointments
    Ce-ar mai fi de spus azi?
    What more will be of what was said today (?)
    Oare chiar m-ai uitat?
    Did you really just forget me?
    Si privesc plangand,
    & I stare crying
    Se duc rand,pe rand,
    & time keeps going (?)
    Vise..
    Dreams
    Oare chiar m-ai uitat de cand am plecat?
    Did you really just forget me ever since I left?
    Last edited by DeBaires; 02-17-2009 at 11:48 PM.
    Nu ştiu de ce lupt aşa pentru tine.
    Ti it l'avėe tut ma adess 't as nen gnente.
    Exchange the sunshine for brown eyes & dark skies, replace this dull life with you.
     
  2. dya said:

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    Good job Here you are:

    Astept o minune,pe bune,
    I wait for a miracle, really

    A spus ca-i sta bine cu mine
    He said that she looks good with me
    Si un vecin, din senin.
    & a neighbor, out of nowhere
    (meaning: a neighbour expressed, out of the blue, his opinion that the couple look good together. )

    Oare nu-s de-ajuns?
    Aren't they really enough? (the tears)

    Ce-ar mai fi de spus azi?
    What more/ else will be to say today

    Se duc rand,pe rand,
    And they pas one by one
    Vise..
    Dreams
    (the dreams pass one by one)
     
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    DeBaires said:

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    Mersi Dya!
    Nu ştiu de ce lupt aşa pentru tine.
    Ti it l'avėe tut ma adess 't as nen gnente.
    Exchange the sunshine for brown eyes & dark skies, replace this dull life with you.