now you know

hmm freeverse kinda thing:


theres nobody in this world
you're the one who knows
they mean nothing
...not a thing
they got it wrong
...all wrong
so hold on
a don't think I could leave you
oh lord ...it's the right thing to do
but I can't keep myself away
it hurts me
you have a romantic charm
but will you learn to forget me?
you've imprinted ony my heart
i'm yours
but they got it all wrong
for nothing, can be done
it's your choice
please just hold on
i'll be there standing outside your door
* * *

Its short. That's all I see wrong-ish. Some grammer mistakes. Would be better to maybe like add like tabs or something... hmm... don't know, your choice.

Its hard to say and pick out all the mistakes because it needs work,work harder my friend and get better.

yess,
the gramatic errors are on purpose :/
because that's how i would sing it, if ya get me?
and the way i sing is, well it's different.
i don't pronounce each word properly, kinda my thing

and.... it fits well will the tune i wrote for my guitar