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  1. A~r@b^ said:

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    growin up was hetic it was worse than hell,
    all da s*** my dad put me thru an' i couldnt tell.
    not a single person or my mouth would swell.
    Around him i became sick, it was just his smell.
    it was enough ta make my a** ghostly pale.
    All the girls at tha house, while mom at work tryna make a sale.
    Im jus so gracious his *** landed in jail.
    An' i pray ta god i dnt end up like him
    Ta have a family that loves ya an' turn around and abuse them.
    or ta break their limbs so you aint gotta teach 'em how ta swim.
    I would like to know why he did tht s***, wat was goin on inside his head.
    Why did mommy have to get hit, after we get tucked into bed.
    Why were you a better father to beer bottle than you were to us.
    Is it because we couldnt give you a buzz?
    Is that why our lips had to get a bust?
    i'll never know but ill wonder til tha day that i die.
    all the tears we ha ta cry, or the hard tries!
    I just wanna know Albert, Why??
    what did we do so d*** wrong, at work did mommy take too long.
    Is that why you seduced women with those songs?
    while you used our heads ta play ping-pong.
    If i were ta see you today you get f***** hit.
    for all those years you left me feelin like s***.
    or for all tha cl*** you cheated on mommy wit.
    Karma has came around an' you have gotten bit.
    i hope lucifer give you mercy while you in the abyssal of a bottemless pit.
    you were never a father, just a pieca smeered s***
    Now youre just a bad memory that ill soon forget.
     
  2. LiL'Pinchy said:

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    got alot of good lines in this one, but there are a few towards the end that you kinda forced the rhyme. maby throw in a few multis.