some one review my song pweesh!

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  1. Atleeka said:

    Post some one review my song pweesh!

    this song could definitely go R&B or a soft pop...with a good beat and maybe it could be a duet between to people.
    Also i don't knw what to call some parts, i dont knew if the (pre chorus should be called that or do people call that a bridge.) HELP ME!

    (chorus)
    My heart, my only heart is waiting for you
    Baby cant you see that It cries for you
    My heart my only heart waiting is for you
    Baby cant you see me crying inside

    (verse 1)
    Was there something that you couldn’t see
    was I hiding something from you
    Why did you turn away, cant you see I’m hurting inside
    If I called your name would run back to me
    I see our love has faded away and I don’t know what went wrong

    (pre chorus)
    Tell me, you love me
    Does your heart hurt like mine?
    Tell me, you miss me
    Do you cry late at night?
    Tell me you want me
    Does your body yearn for mine?
    I keep having all these questions for you and I cant get them out my mind

    (chorus)


    (verse 2)
    Are u afraid to tell me how you truly feel?
    Is that why you cant look at me, when I see you in the street.
    If your feeling lonely will you ever decide to call
    I wait patiently by the phone awaiting you.

    (pre chorus)

    (chorus)


    (verse 3)
    Do you still think of me now? Oh.
    Am I still there in your mind? yeah
    All these questions that I have will never be answered..
    Until you open your heart.

    (chorus 2x)
     

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